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Re: SPQR Test

Post by Ruski on Sun Jul 25, 2010 7:39 pm

I liked it. I especially like the part where Crito is about to be drowned and Gallus saves him, and doesn't demand anything.

I will continue reading this.
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Re: SPQR Test

Post by Death no More on Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:05 pm

Good story, I was surprised Gallus wasn't being a smart ass afterward.
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Post by PiEdude on Sun Jul 25, 2010 8:21 pm

I love it!

The writing itself needs some refinement, but the plot, characters, attention to detail is all fantastic. I look forward to reading more.
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Re: SPQR Test

Post by Angatar on Mon Jul 26, 2010 12:07 am

Ruski wrote:I liked it. I especially like the part where Crito is about to be drowned and Gallus saves him, and doesn't demand anything.
Death no more wrote:Good story, I was surprised Gallus wasn't being a smart ass afterward.
That's discipline for ya.

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Re: SPQR Test

Post by Offensive Bias on Mon Jul 26, 2010 1:46 am

Angatar?! You read?!
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Post by R!zZle BiZzl£ on Sat Jul 31, 2010 4:39 am

Offensive Bias wrote:Angatar?! You read?!

lol, pretty darn good chapters OB, keep 'em up. Very Happy
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Re: SPQR Test

Post by Angatar on Sat Jul 31, 2010 2:30 pm

Offensive Bias wrote:Angatar?! You read?!
I am the mod of this section, of course I read.

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Post by Offensive Bias on Mon Aug 02, 2010 2:47 am

Hmm, first time I've ever got a comment from you. Thank you!
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Post by Angatar on Mon Aug 02, 2010 3:19 am

You're welcome. I hope there's more coming soon.

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Re: SPQR Test

Post by Offensive Bias on Mon Aug 09, 2010 1:27 pm

New chapter is up. Please, comment on it. All criticism is welcome.
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Post by Death no More on Mon Aug 09, 2010 3:49 pm

Good... I'll read it soon

Good chapter, brutal aswell.
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Re: SPQR Test

Post by Ruski on Mon Aug 09, 2010 5:21 pm

Really good new chapter OB. Keep it up.
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Re: SPQR Test

Post by Jamiesway on Mon Aug 09, 2010 6:37 pm

I Should print taht out...then read it,, cuz i read the first two paragragh and WANTED to read it.....but i hate reading shit on the desktop
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Re: SPQR Test

Post by Offensive Bias on Mon Sep 06, 2010 8:56 am

Read it anyway, lol.
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Re: SPQR Test

Post by Offensive Bias on Tue Sep 14, 2010 10:51 am

Okay! Chapter Seven is here. Comments please.
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Re: SPQR Test

Post by Death no More on Tue Sep 14, 2010 1:42 pm

I liked it, cant wait for the big battle XD
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